As some of you may know, I’m working on a comick with my girlfriend. We both have supporting roles in the story and this is a piece of concept art for the comick version of me.
A piece of advice, although you are clearly quite well trained. The hair needs work, the lines are too disordered and random thickness (there’s no logic there, you just put them because you felt like), the little lines/points that suppose to give texture are everywhere and the shading is bizarre and less understood: this would damage the volume. I suggest you take a look over Frank Miller’s work and use a proper pen (old school like) for it will give you a better control over the line. You can use one more color, to add diversity and detail. And as a final note watch the rigidity of the lines, for they define the structure/material of the object. Just wanted to help, peace, out!
I think it rocks, but I’m clearly untrained.
Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:
You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change )
Connecting to %s
Notify me of new comments via email.